Board Thread:Off-Topic Fun/@comment-8883075-20140401045205/@comment-24581193-20140406165306

Zach ho 23 wrote: Ok how about this? Frighten the girl ran as fast as she could and came upon a library in the forest,upon entering the Library she found a book about gaining powers which the spell said a wand of any kind,a golden apple,diamond slippers,the necklace of dark power,water from the fountain of youth and lastly fairy dust sorry it is one long sentence That was actually 2 sentances.The comma you put after Forest and Upon shoul have been a period.Alicia Then walk's her home and when she thinks Alicia is asleep she goes back to find the item's.