Board Thread:Fanon: Season 8 & Beyond/@comment-25375217-20180529030357/@comment-25926288-20180531200503

DatNuttyKid wrote: Here's a quote from "Girl of the Cinders". I was going to use it as the page quote but decided it didn't fit, but it's pretty important to the plot so I want to store it somewhere. I guess this counts as a script tease?

"You can stay here, with me. I will train you in the ways of magic. I will give you a warm bed to sleep in and you will be properly fed. Someday, I will die, and you will take my place. You will live comfortably, but alone. Or, you can go back home. Your stepmother will continue to abuse you and take advantage of you. You will be made to sleep in the cinders by the fireplace. But, someday... if your heart stays pure through all of your torture... you will find happiness. You will meet your True Love. You will have a family who cares for you. And you will even see your father again. It's up to you, Ella. There is no wrong answer."

- The Apprentice to Cinderella

Can we shorten it down? First sentence with cinders and the following one.

I’m kidding as you can do as you wish, just reminding me how I have a lot of “Apprentices” in my script-to-be. Scripts are a neat challenge to novel-style writing.