Thread:Thodgins46/@comment-5571405-20121228211101

Please put the action/movement in brackets when including them in the dialouge.

Snow White: (Snow White gets up) I'm here father - Makes reading much easier than

Snow White: Snow White gets up I'm here father - which makes reading quite difficult.

P.S. I know that it is sometimes difficult to hear what they are saying. So, please let me know if there is anything you are not sure of because it is much easier than having to correct dialogue. 