Thread:Applegirl/@comment-5094906-20131022175422/@comment-4975807-20131022181602

I appreciate your help with the summaries, but the style in which you write is not in style with how summaries are written on the wiki. I notice you have many sentence structure issues. Sometimes you write he/ she twice in one sentence, or use the character's name twice in one sentence. Your style of writing, "Before the events of/After the events of" should not even be in the summary. There's also an excessive use of the words "then" and unnecessary use of the words "appear", "reveal", "shown/seen". All words that are describing things in a very objective manner, which should not be there. You should also know the wiki does not use shortened names in summaries.

In all honesty, I undid your edit because it's not up to the bar of how a summary should look and read on a wiki. Coming from my perspective, there are many other people going through the pages reading the summaries, and what I read on the Peter Pan page had mistakes that would simply not read well for other users. It's not just about writing summaries and hitting the publish button right away. I spend all week after each new episode working and proof reading my own summaries and rereading written sentences. It would help if you also proof read your own summaries because it's one thing to have a few minor errors that need correcting, but when you see me changing whole paragraphs to reword your written sentences or even Kung adding a template tab on the Red Queen page right after your published edit, which read, "It is revealed/shown should not be used in history summaries" (http://onceuponatime.wikia.com/wiki/Red_Queen?diff=249252&oldid=249231) that is more than just a few errors, and it's very trying work to have be recorrected.