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DarKingdomHearts wrote:

Harbinger3781 wrote:

DarKingdomHearts wrote: Eskaver wrote: Harbinger3781 wrote: No problem with LGBT couples, but for this particular episode, think THIS romance feels... forced in - like a sudden blindside & ambush, and not natural like the rest. Ruby and Dorothy were together like, literally, a couple more or less than ten hours, and they were already crowned True Love and their kiss accepted, then straight to priority-II mission complete, case closed? Gotta ask Cupid whether his Arrows really are THAT effective, 'cause even for his "First-Contact Instant Effect" type paramour arrows, that's gotta be some record there. I mean, even rom-com movies from Hallmark, the couples were together for at least a week before their relationship goes past platonic. Plus, none of the main couples' romances were cemented yet.

However, on another topic, looks like Henry's handling his Author gig pretty well, and things pretty much remain to be seen whether Zelena can actually become Hades' Persephone. I understand what you mean. We don;t have a good scale of time, but from what was shown it looked as though (to any person that's not looking at a timeline) that Red and Mulan met Dorothy at the brink of night and saw Zelena come in via tornado. Then, over that night Red and Dorothy went to get poppies, came back, and then Dorothy went to bed. Then when morning came, Dorothy was gone. It would help if dialogue said "we've been at this for days" or something because otherwise, it would appear that only hours went by and most of that time was sleeping and searching for Dorothy. Something like: "It took some days but the brew is almost near completion, we only need some Poppy flowers." They're gonna need better expression. One pass-and-miss line was quite forgettable - literally did not remember this line until you mentioned it. And the relationship development between Red and Dorothy was not exactly well expressed. Still feels very rushed. I believe that that line wasn't in the episode. I was just making a suggestion that a single line like that already could have helped I dunno... but the did say something about poppy flowers... right?