Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6252544-20131015155830/@comment-6175354-20131115033337

GothicNarcissus wrote: Here the story was: Regina is chasing Snow White, period; the whole Little Mermaid tale was just a marginal detail of this. That's why it was so poorly developed. It felt like, rather than taking a fairytale and rewriting it to include the feud into the story, here we had the feud first and then wrote the new fairytale into it. It's a subtle difference, but it's there. I see you point.... while the Ariel flashback was strong, it still could have been better.

I felt like the Regina chasing Snow White stuff, was in the background. Especially, when Regina stole Ariel's voice.... as that was solely revenge on Ariel. Perhaps the main problem, was the format. The events seemed to be, a what happened off-page mashup, instead of an actual ''twist to the tale. ''