Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26643527-20150928073737/@comment-24674051-20150928152632

I disagree with it being rushed. I like that we get the beginning and the midpoint of the story, and then use flashbacks to fill in the inbetween times. I've seen that used very well in other stories I've read. The inbetween time will help us understand how Emma got to where she was, and may also provide some insight into what might happen next as the story continues to pull Emma away from the Darkness. (Emma becomeing the Dark Swan is not the End of the Story, if it was, then I'd agree).