Thread:Utter solitude/@comment-3003805-20120525013816/@comment-4839682-20120525015406

Whatever is written down now? You mean this?

"A few days after Emma Swan had arrived in Storybrooke, she and Henry Mills convinced Mary Margaret Blanchard to read Henry's storybook, which was full of the stories from Fairytale Land, to John Doe. Mary Margaret is reluctant at first, but the two convince her and she goes to David's room that night. She sits on the side of the bed and begins to read. Halfway through the story, David, while still unconscious, grabs Mary Margaret's hand."

Clearly states that MM went to read to him, so you changing it was unnecessary.