Board Thread:Off-Topic Fun/@comment-5679696-20150115020645/@comment-1916997-20150120225216

DarKingdomHearts wrote: CoolDudeAl wrote: DarKingdomHearts wrote: Sorry but how did he get in the castle? Can he jump very high? Can he fly?

I think making these long 'sentences' is cheating the rules as they can made into 2 or 3 sentences very easily. Well, the rules say one sentence per day, and if I want to write a compound, complex sentence, I don't see how that is cheating. But the way you are doing it is like controlling the story. Although your post can be tolerated imo because it tells just a tiny piece. But DatNuttyKid forgets that the castle is in the sky, how did he get up there? And just skips may things. His post could have been done in three sentences;

1) The witch gave him (...) to fly to the castle / grew a beanstalk / used gravity to descend the castle

2) When entering the castle to save Dandelia he encountered a gigantic beast that had imprisoned her, but after a though fight managed to defeat the beast.

3) After saving Dandelia he tried to woo her, but got turned down by him because (how does she know he is not the heir of the throne, the King just received the message)

The vizer was send out to search for someone, he didn't become the heir Those are valid points, we can retcon the last bit, if you say something like "The prince woke up from a vision he had in the marsh that he had gotten from its noxious fumes" or something.