Board Thread:Spoilers!/@comment-25375217-20171128195846/@comment-25926288-20171129025812

CoolDudeAl wrote: Land Without Stories should have been Land Without Magic. Probably just an error on her part. The date is like that because Hank never got to finish his journal. He started it in 1887, but he never finished it, because he was portaled to Camelot in 1889. Only thing that bothers me so far is some of Emma and Regina's dialog. I thought Wendy was pretty spot on with her characters dialog, but Michelle's seems not quite as on par with the show. Of course, Wendy just had to write for EF personas, whereas these are EF + SB persona after all six seasons of the show, so it may be the trickier job. Come now, half the show’s dialogue is recycled! XD

I think she’s got the Regina and Emma dialogue down. Regina sounds overprotective, which she is. Emma is going “Hey, kid” and being slightly more casual as she’s chaperoning in the trip. I found Wendy’s to be fine as well. (I thought it was “fake” in RR, but that was the point with Claire being um—you know, and Cora faking things.)

Yeah, LWS could just be the LWMs specific name/ alternate name. There could be more LWMs, but the LWS is simply one of them.